Tuesday, January 12, 2010

#2

Poetry

Words with a destiny.
versatile, concrete
Meanings always wavering.
insanity, on the brink
Emotions fluid throughout.
insightful, obsolete
Written art comes to life.
paper, a bit of ink

4 comments:

  1. Wow. Who knew such a short piece could be so spot on? I think this is a great definition of poetry. There are so many different facets and you seem to have covered most of them in a piece that is straight to the point, which I love. Nice work!

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  2. well that about sums it all up! I love it short but strong.

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  3. I really think that this is beautiful. I love how you formed this poem, and the words you used. Wonderful!

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  4. I think you did an excellent job giving poetry a distinct definition. I found the rhyming throughout very fresh. I particularly loved the first and last two lines...Really great job!

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